Excellent use of Michaela Dietz's pedestrian dialogue from GTA, I remember you wanted to use those lines somewhere for a long while and so happy you got to do this.

There are definitely areas of improvement but for a first time animated short you did really well with good fluidity of movement, and good timing and use of the sfx as needed.

There's the best boy!

I'm absolutely in love with the rendering here the glow is present but not so much it's overpowering. Kickass job with the anatomy too you've not shied away from the joints, pipes and sprockets keeping them together and it's made a really strong piece.

Absolutely fantastic stuff!

Awww it'll be a shame to say goodbye to the tum, I liked the body type mix-ups but I can admire this goal <3