Excellent use of Michaela Dietz's pedestrian dialogue from GTA, I remember you wanted to use those lines somewhere for a long while and so happy you got to do this.

There are definitely areas of improvement but for a first time animated short you did really well with good fluidity of movement, and good timing and use of the sfx as needed.

An incredible set, I adore your Tron and Megadunce is unapologetically naive and I love him a lot for it.

I'd comment on each section to express how well it flows, with the panels and narrative but repeating myself would feel redundant only to just express it here.

A well-realised dynamic that progresses wonderfully and every installment moved it along in a scintillating way that never lost a sense of humor.

Amazing work, I love his face, and her rear, she's a great shape with an incredible outfit.

The background is also so nice, really superb work all around.

There's the best boy!

I'm absolutely in love with the rendering here the glow is present but not so much it's overpowering. Kickass job with the anatomy too you've not shied away from the joints, pipes and sprockets keeping them together and it's made a really strong piece.